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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, - explain the reasons for the noise - apologise - describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, - explain the reasons for the noise - apologise - describe what action you will take m1LmO
Dear Taylor, I have received your complain letter and would like to explain the situation. The point is that I am a student at University of Music, therefore I have to practice at least during several hours a day. Sometimes, me and my band make a rehearsal at my place because we do not have another venue for doing it. I value your calm and I am extremely sorry for the noise, I cannot drop my music practice completely though. However, I promise that I will take certain actions to eliminate this issue as soon as possible. Firstly, I will stop my practicing during evenings and on weekends. Secondly, although we have a concert in one month, our music band will not gather in my appartment any more. Lastly, I am planning to set up soundproof walls and a ceiling, so that the sound would not disturb you any more. Untill it is done, I stop my exercises. Thank you for your patience. Yours faithfully, Arthur.
Dear Taylor,

I have received your
complain
letter and would like to
explain
the situation. The point is that I am a student at University of Music,
therefore
I
have to
practice at least during several hours a day.
Sometimes
, me and my band
make
a rehearsal at my place
because
we do not have another venue for doing it.

I value your
calm and
I am
extremely
sorry for the noise, I cannot drop my music practice completely though.
However
, I promise that I will take certain actions to eliminate this issue as
soon
as possible.

Firstly
, I will
stop
my practicing during evenings and on weekends.
Secondly
, although we have a concert in one month, our music band will not gather in my
appartment
any more
.
Lastly
, I am planning to set up soundproof walls and a ceiling,
so
that the sound would not disturb you
any more
.
Untill
it
is done
, I
stop
my exercises.

Thank you for your patience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Arthur.
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, - explain the reasons for the noise - apologise - describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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