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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. BJY5a
Dear Mrs Richards, I am writing to ask you to give me a short vacation. I need approximately 5 workdays to complete my qualification class. It will be the best way for me, if this time is from Monday, 5 to Friday, 9. I will do my best to meet the deadline for all my current tasks. Furthermore, I want to ask you to allow me to use our IP access and I will get the opportunity to work from home even during my vacation. I want to underline that I decided to take that special course for raising my qualification level. I believe that all new knowledge will help me to open new prospects in our company and enable me to achieve new goals in my future career. I would be glad to get your approval. If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Jane Wheel.
Dear Mrs Richards,

I am writing to ask you to give me a short vacation. I need approximately 5 workdays to complete my qualification
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. It will be the best way for me, if this time is from Monday, 5 to Friday, 9.

I will do my best to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the deadline for all my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
tasks.
Furthermore
, I want to ask you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
our IP access and I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the opportunity to work from home even during my vacation.

I want to underline that I decided to take that special course for raising my qualification level. I believe that all new knowledge will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to open new prospects in our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and enable me to achieve new goals in my future career.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be glad to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your approval.

If you require any
further
information,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours
sincerely
, Jane Wheel.

IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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