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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3 PVMQE
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection to the correction to be made in the article released on the 1st of February about Trivandrum. I have been residing here for the past twenty-five years and am confident to comment error in the article. Trivandrum has one of the richest temples in the world as is open to the public every day from 9: 00 to 12: 00. But in the newspaper, it is mentioned that the tourists are not allowed to enter the premises. As it is a tourist spot and has increased the flow of foreigners over the past three months, it is significant to change the information you have provided. As your newspaper is pretty popular abroad and particularly this article is of interest to the tourists, it would be great if you can correct the typo. I would suggest that you include the correct details in the daily release. All the details relating to the spot are explained on the site. Thanks for your consideration in advance Yours faithfully, Reshma
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection to the correction to
be made
in the article released on the 1st of February about Trivandrum. I have been residing here for the past twenty-five years and am confident to comment error in the article.

Trivandrum has one of the richest temples in the world as is open to the public every day from 9: 00 to 12: 00.
But
in the newspaper, it
is mentioned
that the tourists are not
allowed
to enter the premises.

As it is a tourist spot and has increased the flow of foreigners over the past three months, it is significant to
change
the information you have provided. As your newspaper is pretty popular abroad and
particularly
this article is of interest to the tourists, it would be great if you can correct the typo.

I would suggest that you include the correct
details
in the daily release. All the
details
relating to the spot are
explained
on the site. Thanks for your consideration in advance

Yours
faithfully
,
Reshma
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3

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  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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