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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, PxOB
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to nominate Mr. Shubh Sethi for community help awards. I am delighted to know about an award function and I believe that Mr. Sethi is the right person who should be getting this award. He has taken the initiative to maintain clean surroundings in our area. Also, he has actively organized many events to raise awareness about healthy living. He has been motivating people to join his campaigns for the past two years. In addition, he organizes many plantation activities for children. Overall, his efforts had helped in keeping our society clean and green. It would be great if he could be awarded appropriately for his positive actions. As he was looking to buy a bicycle to commute to his work, he would be happy if he receives it as an award. This would help him in overcoming his daily struggles. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Saniya Sharma
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to nominate Mr.
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Shubh
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Sethi
for community
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help
awards. I
am delighted
to know about an award function and I believe that Mr.
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Sethi
is the right person who should be getting this award.

He has taken the initiative to maintain clean surroundings in our area.
Also
, he has
actively
organized
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
to raise awareness about healthy living. He has been motivating
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
his campaigns for the past two years.
In addition
, he organizes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
plantation activities for children.
Overall
, his efforts had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
in keeping our society clean and green.

It would be great if he could
be awarded
appropriately
for his
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
actions. As he was looking to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a bicycle to commute to his work, he would be happy if he receives it as an award. This would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
him in overcoming his daily struggles.

Thank you in advance for your time and consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Saniya
Sharma
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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