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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take rwVm
Dear Susan, I am writing you this letter in the response to the complaint that you files to the head of the society regarding the noise that comes from my appartment. I apologise to you for the issue which you are facing. As you know, that there are children in my flat and they love to party late night with their friends. So, they used to listen loud music. And they have a passion for classical music though. Also classical music sometimes are on a louder pitch. I will ask my children to lower the volume of the songs whenever they party at the appartment or they could change the timings of the party. Also, better I will ask them to party outside the society so that there is no disturb to any one in the society. I genuine owe your apology, as it's my children fault. Request you to not file legal complaint reagarding the noise that would a great help though. Yours Sincerly, Niharika
Dear Susan,

I am writing you this letter in the response to the complaint that you
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files
to the head of the society regarding the noise that
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comes
from my
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appartment
.

I
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apologise
to you for the issue which you are facing. As you know, that there are children in my
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flat and
they
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love
to
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party
late night with their friends.
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So
, they
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used
to listen loud music. And they have a passion for classical music though.
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Also
classical music
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sometimes are
on a louder pitch. I will ask my children to lower the volume of the songs whenever they
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party
at the
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appartment or
they could
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change
the timings of the
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party
.
Also
, better I will ask them to
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party
outside the society
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so
that there is no disturb to
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any one
in the society.

I genuine owe your apology, as it's my children fault. Request you to not file legal complaint
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reagarding
the noise that would a great
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help
though.

Yours
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Sincerly
,

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Niharika

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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