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You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Anna,

You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Anna, NJjj
Dear Anna, I hope you are fine and staying safe with your family. I believe that you really enjoy a great days with your kids as they are growing day by day. I am writing this letter to inform you that, I have recently changed my city, due to shift my office branch. As there was a numbers of discussion was going between my manager and me regarding new location and at last I got agreed to obey his decision, of course there is a extreme hike in my benefits. Hence, I decided to move from London. Now, I am in Paris which is well-known as fashion city. It is really beautiful city and the locality is more flexible. There are large gardens near to my area which are always full of fitness people in the early morning. Besides, it has variety of buildings which are famous for their architectural works. Paris is also known for most famous wonder of "The Eiffel tower". As you are aware of city, therefore my kind request to you and your family to make a small trip to see this place. It will be my warm gesture to welcome you to my house and spend a precious time with us. I'll be awaiting for your reply and hope you have enjoyable time with your family. Yours, Nina.
Dear Anna,

I hope you are fine and staying safe with your family. I believe that you
really
enjoy a great
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days
with your kids as they are growing day by day.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to inform you that, I have recently
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changed
my city, due to shift my office branch.

As there was
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a numbers
of discussion was going between my manager and me regarding new location and at last I
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got
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agreed
to obey his decision,
of course
there is
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a
extreme hike in my benefits.
Hence
, I decided to
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move
from London.

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Now
, I am in Paris which is well-known as fashion city. It is
really
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beautiful
city and the locality is more flexible. There are large gardens near to my area which are always full of fitness
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people
in the early morning.
Besides
, it has variety of buildings which are
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famous
for their architectural works. Paris is
also
known for most
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famous
wonder of
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"
The
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Eiffel tower
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"
. As you are aware of city,
therefore
my kind request to you and your family to
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make
a
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small
trip to
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see
this place. It will be my warm gesture to welcome you to my
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house
and spend a precious time with us.

I'll be
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awaiting for
your reply and hope you have enjoyable time with your family.

Yours, Nina.

IELTS letter You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Anna,

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  American English
6 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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