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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Wbj0
Dear John, First of all, I would like to thank you for agreeing to look after my house and my pet while I am away this coming weekend. In case you need anything from me, you may contact me at 0919-0000-000 and I will be staying at Osaka Hotel. The hotel's number is 888-000-000, in case I am not reachable, you may leave them a message. Just a few reminders, the dog should be fed twice a day, one in the morning and one at night. The food is in the black cupboard in the kitchen. Also, after feeding the dog, take him for a walk for around 30 minutes. Then afterwards, you can bathe him. I have another favor. I am expecting to receive a package on Saturday. When it arrives, kindly bring it to my parent's house. Thank you. JG
Dear John,

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I would like to thank you for agreeing to look after my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and my pet while I am away this coming weekend. In case you need anything from me, you may contact me at 0919-0000-000 and I will be staying at Osaka Hotel. The hotel's number is 888-000-000, in case I am not reachable, you may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
them a message.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
a few reminders, the dog should
be fed
twice a day, one in the morning and one at night. The food is in the black cupboard in the kitchen.
Also
, after feeding the dog, take him for a walk for around 30 minutes. Then afterwards, you can bathe him.

I have another favor. I am expecting to receive a package on Saturday. When it arrives, kindly bring it to my parent's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Thank you. JG
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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