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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work.

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Dear Albert, I have recently aware of a course called Financial accounting for company module and I'm writing this to ask you for support on taking this course. it is a five days intensive course begin organized by Global accounting association and it starts by May 28 Monday and i believe the course great benefit for the company as we have newly launched a Finance department which can make us to work easily for the company accounting. After reviewing the previous participant i clearly come to know the course is strongly useful to our company in maintaining the company accounts on 100 percent accuracy and in capacity of maintaining a huge value of various accounts of the company. For this reason I'm requesting you paid leave from 28 to 30 May to attend the course it would be useful if other team members did not take leave at this time. so far nobody has applied i believe this will not be particularly busy time at work. but i am prepared to include me in working in the evening if required. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes Bala murugan

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 far nobody has applied Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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soon
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