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ou have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter: - describe the item - explain where and when you left it - say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain regarding the loss of my bag on your train. My name is Tina and I am frequent traveller on your train on Route C. On Monday, as usual, when I was going to my office on your train; I lost my brown colour leather bag. Actually, I fell asleep after I had got into your train at around 9; 30 AM at Stevenson station. Later I realised that I had forgotten my bag in the train. I have various valuable items in the bag like my employee ID without which I will be unable to enter my office. I also have my wallet inside the bag which contains some cash and credit cards. Could you please take necessary action and help me in searching my bag. I also request you to convey the message to the railway staff who are on duty during this time. Please let me know if you need any further details. I am reachable at 98104980. Yours faithfully, Tina
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain regarding the loss of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
on your
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train
. My name is
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Tina and
I am frequent
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traveller
on your
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train
on Route C.

On Monday, as usual, when I was going to my office on your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
train
; I lost my brown
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colour
leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
. Actually, I fell asleep after I had
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got
into your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
train
at around 9; 30 AM at Stevenson station. Later I
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realised
that I had forgotten my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
in the train.

I have various valuable items in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
like my employee ID without which I will be unable to enter my office. I
also
have my wallet inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
which contains
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some
cash and credit cards.

Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
take necessary action and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in searching my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
. I
also
request you to convey the message to the railway staff who are on duty during this time.

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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you need any
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
. I am reachable at 98104980.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tina

IELTS letter ou have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter: - describe the item - explain where and when you left it - say what action you would like the company to take

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  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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