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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take qoOE
Dear Mr. Patel, I'm writing to address your concerns about the noise from my house in response to your letter. Let me explain my situation in detail. The reasons for the noise is that my dog Simon isn't keeping well lately. He has cancer detected in his stomach and he is in critical condition. Because of this situation, my other dog Max; howls so that we keep an eye on Simon. Hence, there are loud noises coming out of my house. I'm so very sorry for the inconvenience to you and another neighbours. I'm, however, looking at a solution to this problem. The vet has informed us that Simon has stage-4 cancer and has advised us to put him down. Our family is just taking some time to process this and then we shall take the next steps. In the meanwhile, I'm travelling with Simon to Goa for a week, since he loves beaches so that his final days are peaceful and calm. I shall meet you in person once I am back from Goa. Best Wishes, Sneha
Dear Mr. Patel,

I'm writing to address your concerns about the noise from my
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house
in response to your letter.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in detail. The reasons for the noise is that my dog Simon isn't keeping well lately. He has cancer detected in his
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
stomach and
he is in critical condition.
Because of this
situation, my other dog Max; howls
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so
that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
an eye on Simon.
Hence
, there are loud noises coming out of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

I'm
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so
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very
sorry for the inconvenience to you and another
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neighbours
. I'm,
however
, looking at a solution to this problem. The vet has informed us that Simon has stage-4 cancer and has advised us to put him down. Our family is
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just
taking
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some
time to process
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this and
then we shall take the
next
steps. In the meanwhile, I'm travelling with Simon to Goa for a week, since he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loves
beaches
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so
that his final days are peaceful and calm.

I shall
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meet
you in person once I am back from Goa.

Best Wishes,

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Sneha
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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