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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him / her your other news

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him / her your other news KEgL
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you at the peak of your health. I am writing this to you to let you know about the current affairs of my life. As you know, I was working in the superstore as a general employee and I was not happy with that job. The big news this that I changed my job. I applied for the manager post in a multinational company and I got selected for a manager post. I work here as full- time and I have my separate cabin with the computer desk and I have my personal assistant also which helps me in my office work. Aside from this, I moved to a new house near to my workplace. It, s a small one-bedroom townhouse in but the center of the city. Moreover, I joined the dance class because now I have leisure time after my job. I feel happier today because of these changes. So, how about you. I hope to see you very soon. In the meantime, write me and let me know about your life. Warm wishes, Kim
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you at the peak of your health. I am writing this to you to
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affairs of my life. As you know, I was working in the superstore as a general employee and I was not happy with that job. The
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big
news this that I
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changed
my job. I applied for the manager post in a multinational
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company
and I
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got
selected for a manager post. I work here as full- time and I have my separate cabin with the computer desk and I have my personal assistant
also
which
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helps
me in my office work. Aside from this, I
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moved
to a new
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house
near to my workplace. It, s a
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small
one-bedroom townhouse in
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but
the center of the city.
Moreover
, I
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joined
the dance
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I have leisure time after my job. I feel happier
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today
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of these
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changes
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, how about you. I hope to
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. In the meantime, write me and
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me know about your life. Warm wishes,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Kim

IELTS letter You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him / her your other news

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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