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write aletter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.*describr the problrm is affecting your work*explain how this problem is affecting your work*say what you want the shope or company to do.

write aletter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. *describr the problrm is affecting your work*explain how this problem is affecting your work*say what you want the shope or company to do. MK1a
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about the digital pen which I purchased from your shop during the pandemic of coronovirus in month of March 2020. The digital pen was working well till yesterday. It does not print any character on screen from today morning; though, it shows some marking on screen. Let me explain my situation in more details. I am a teacher and I am working from the home to teach the students. So my students are unable to see my work on the screen. In addition, I am science and mathematic teacher hence, I need to draw a diagram and indicating all parts of it. Moreover, In mathematic subject to solve problems the digital pen is very useful. I would suggest you to change the digital pen if this is not possible to repair. I am legging behind of my syllabus complition task befor this month end therfore, I request you to take action as early as possible. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Amita Dholakia
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the digital
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pen
which I
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purchased
from your shop during the pandemic of
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coronovirus
in month of March 2020. The digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pen
was working well till yesterday. It does not print any character on screen from
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today morning
; though, it
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shows
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some
marking on screen.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in more
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details
. I am a
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teacher and
I am working from the home to teach the students.
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So
my students are unable to
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see
my work on the screen.
In addition
, I am science and mathematic teacher
hence
, I need to draw a diagram and indicating all parts of it.
Moreover
, In mathematic subject to solve problems the digital
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pen
is
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very
useful.

I would suggest you to
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change
the digital
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pen
if this is not possible to repair. I am legging behind of my syllabus
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complition
task
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befor
this month
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end
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therfore
, I request you to take action as early as possible.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Amita
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Dholakia
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IELTS letter write aletter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. *describr the problrm is affecting your work*explain how this problem is affecting your work*say what you want the shope or company to do.

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172 words
6.0
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