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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you 16j7
Hi, Sam, I hope this letter finds you at the peak of your health. I am writing this in regard to thank you for the lovely pitchers and your hospitality for my visit to Kitchener. I am sorry for the delay to write back. The reason for this delay is my mother's health. My mother met with an accident last month. As you know I am the only one who looks after her because of other relative's lives way far. Lucky, She is out of danger now and the doctor suggests her bed rest for 2 weeks. I would like to invite you to visit my home town on the Bone fire night. It, s a very famous festival in London which is celebrated on new year Eva. I know you love to celebrate and participate in different cultural activities. I hope to see you on the bone fire night. Look forward to hearing from you. Warm Wishes, Guri
Hi, Sam, I hope this letter finds you at the peak of your health. I am writing this in regard to thank you for the lovely pitchers and your hospitality for my visit to Kitchener. I am sorry for the delay to write back. The reason for this delay is my mother's health. My mother met with an accident last month. As you know I am the
only
one who looks after her
because
of other
relative's
lives
way far. Lucky, She is out of
danger
now
and the doctor suggests her bed rest for 2 weeks. I would like to invite you to visit my home town on the Bone fire night. It, s a
very
famous
festival in London which
is celebrated
on new year Eva. I know you
love
to celebrate and participate in
different
cultural activities. I hope to
see
you on the bone fire night. Look forward to hearing from you. Warm Wishes,
Guri
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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