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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract. GaAg
Dear Sir, My name is Joseph Thomas and I am a tenant from you for the last 1. 8 years. I am writing this letter to you to inform that I would like to preponed the contract due to some official reasons. I have been renting the flat Misty Hills, Aluva and my apartment number is 12C. My rental agreement is for 2 years and the contract ends on December 2018. But unfortunately, I need to leave the flat two months early because our companies head office is shifting from Cochin to Trivandrum and all the employees and asked to work from there. As I am not able to stay until the contract period, kindly allow me to leave the space early by two months. Already I have paid the rent till October and please inform me regarding further formalities. Looking forward to hear from you Yours Faithfully Joseph Thomas
Dear Sir,

My name is Joseph
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Thomas and
I am a tenant from you for the last 1. 8 years. I am writing this letter to you to inform that I would like to
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preponed
the contract due to
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some
official reasons.

I have been renting the flat Misty Hills,
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Aluva
and my apartment number is 12C. My rental agreement is for 2 years and the contract ends on December 2018.
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But
unfortunately, I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the flat two months early
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because
our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
head office is shifting from Cochin to Trivandrum and all the employees and asked to work from there.

As I am not able to stay until the contract period, kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the space early by two months. Already I have paid the rent till October and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
inform me regarding
further
formalities.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you

Yours
Faithfully


Joseph Thomas

IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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