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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sharmaji, Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter that you sent me yesterday about the noise from my flat. As you know we have bought this house a few months back, renovation is required before my family moves in. There is a seepage problem in one of the bedrooms and the kitchen furniture is unfinished. Due to holidays last few weeks, the workers were unavailable, and hence, they work in double shifts these days to complete the unfinished project which is the main cause for the disturbance. I really regret the event and request your forgiveness. I will make sure that no operations go on during nap time. Please accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience. We will be more careful next time. Hoping to meet you in person on my next visit to the flat. Yours Sincerely, Ishita Kothari
Dear
Sharmaji
,

Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter that you
sent
me yesterday about the noise from my flat. As you know we have
bought
this
house
a few months back, renovation
is required
before
my family
moves
in. There is a seepage problem in one of the bedrooms and the kitchen furniture
is unfinished
. Due to holidays last few weeks, the workers were unavailable, and
hence
, they work in double shifts these days to complete the unfinished project which is the main cause for the disturbance.

I
really
regret the
event
and request your forgiveness. I will
make
sure that no operations go on during nap time.
Please
accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience. We will be more careful
next
time.

Hoping to
meet
you in person on my
next
visit to the flat.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Ishita
Kothari
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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