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write a reference letter to your former teacher. In your letter give the details of the job, explain why it is important to you and suggest what information your teacher can put in

Dear Mr. Dacera, I knew it was almost five years since we have spoken personally but the reason why I have writing this letter is to request a reference letter which I needed in the job that I am applying. After numerous interview, the employer have chosen me as the successful candidate for their job opening in Texas, USA and the background of the job is in Automotive Industry. My role will be working as their sales representative in west coast of America. The task assign to me is spearheading the sales of their new model of cars to their loyal customer and this will be available to the market that end of this year. I know asking for a reference letter may cause an inconvenience in your side but the job opportunity given to me will not only develop advancement in my career but also opening window to a bright future for my family. I have the chance to bring my family to USA together with me and as discussed with my Country Manager, we have an could be a bonafide citizen in USA after four years. This job also include housing allowances and educational assistance which seldom to be offered by any company. The reference letter I am requesting shall include your personal opinion when I was your student and also the thesis I have presented which won the award for the thesis of the year. The research paper I have made was one of the criteria that I have accepted for this job. Yours truly, Dan Garcia
Dear Mr.
Dacera
,

I knew it was almost five years since we have spoken
personally
but
the reason why I have writing this
letter
is to request a reference
letter
which I needed in the
job
that I am applying. After numerous interview, the employer have chosen me as the successful candidate for their
job
opening in Texas, USA and the background of the
job
is in Automotive Industry. My role will be working as their sales representative in west coast of America. The task assign to me is spearheading the sales of their new model of cars to their loyal customer and this will be available to the market that
end
of this year.

I know asking for a reference
letter
may cause an inconvenience in your side
but
the
job
opportunity
given
to me will not
only
develop advancement in my career
but
also
opening window to a bright future for my family. I have the chance to bring my family
to USA
together with me and as discussed with my Country Manager, we have
an
could be a
bonafide
citizen
in USA
after four years. This
job
also
include housing allowances and educational assistance which seldom to
be offered
by any
company
.

The reference
letter
I am requesting shall include your personal opinion when I was your student and
also
the thesis I have presented which won the award for the thesis of the year. The research paper I have made was one of the criteria that I have
accepted
for this job.

Yours
truly
,

Dan Garcia
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IELTS letter write a reference letter to your former teacher. In your letter give the details of the job, explain why it is important to you and suggest what information your teacher can put in

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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