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Letter to a friend suggesting about a job opportunity

Dear Naina, It was a pleasant surprise to receive your recent letter in which you have stated your intention to find a job in Japan. I'm still relishing the pleasant memories we had together during our last trip and it would be absolutely fabulous if come ad live in Japan Well, you would be glad to know that a friend of mine who happens to work in Japan telecommunications, has recently told me that the company is looking for a Cloud architect, who has thorough understanding of cloud architecture and designing. They also expect the candidate to manage a team of junior professionals. You will training for 1 month on how to deal with clients. I am quite convinced that you would be a perfect fit to this job as you good at handling robust, scalable, secure and dynamic solutions, moreover, I believe this job role we'll help gain some experience in dealing with customers and it will be an excellent addition to your resume. Finally I would like to let you know about the procedure for applying to this position. I will collect a copy of the application for on your behalf and post it to your parent's address. You need to fill in all the details and attach the copies of your academic certificates to the form. If you have any questions about this vacancy, please feel free to contact me. You can also visit the company website for more information. With regards, Divya

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told
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company
 is looking for a Cloud architect, who has thorough understanding of cloud architecture and designing. They also
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expect
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training
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help
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some
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 it will be an excellent addition to your resume.

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Finally
 I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know about the procedure for applying to this position. I will collect a copy of the application for on your behalf and post it to your parent's address. You need to fill in all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 and attach the copies of your academic certificates to the form. If you have any questions about this vacancy, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 feel free to contact me. You can also
 visit the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 website for more information.

With regards, Divya