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Letter to a friend helping to find a job in japan

Dear Nina, It was a pleasant surprise to receive your recent letter in which you have stated your intention to find a job in Japan. Well, you would be glad to know that a friend of mine who happens to work in Japan telecommunications, has recently told me that the company is looking for a Cloud architect, who has thorough understanding of cloud architecture and designing. They expect the candidate to manage a team of junior professionals. In addition, there is training for 1 month on how to deal with clients. Undoubtedly, you would be a perfect fit to this role as you are good at providing robust, scalable, secure and dynamic solutions. Importantly, I believe this opportunity will help gain experience in dealing with the clients and it will be an excellent addition to your resume. Finally, I would like to explain you know about the procedure for applying to this position. I will collect a copy of the application on your behalf and post it to your parent's address. You need to fill in all the details and attach the copies of your academic certificates. If you have any of questions about this vacancy, please feel free to contact me. In fact, you can visit the corporation website too for further information. With regards, Divya
Dear Nina, It was a pleasant surprise to receive your recent letter in which you have stated your intention to find a job in Japan.

Well, you would be glad to know that a friend of mine who happens to work in Japan telecommunications, has recently
told
me that the
company
is looking for a Cloud architect, who has thorough understanding of cloud architecture and designing. They
expect
the candidate to manage a team of junior professionals.
In addition
, there is training for 1 month on how to deal with clients.
Undoubtedly
, you would be a perfect fit to this role as you are
good
at providing robust, scalable, secure and dynamic solutions.
Importantly
, I believe this opportunity will
help
gain experience in dealing with the
clients and
it will be an excellent addition to your resume.

Finally
, I would like to
explain
you know about the procedure for applying to this position. I will collect a copy of the application on your behalf and post it to your parent's address. You need to fill in all the
details
and attach the copies of your academic certificates. If you have any of questions about this vacancy,
please
feel free to contact me. In fact, you can visit the corporation website too for
further
information.

With regards, Divya
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend helping to find a job in japan

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
216 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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