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You successfully passed a job interview,you are expected to Start on november 15, but you will be not available on that date. Write a letter to your new boss,explaining your situation,expressing your concern and Suggesting a solution

Dear sir/madame, Iam afraid to let you know that unfortunately iam not going to be able to start my new job at the sales management department on the agreed date which is november 15, due to some circumstances beyond me. i really hope you consider my situation favorably. Let me explain my situation in more details, as i have already mentioned in the interview, i haven't quit my curent job yet, because i had to finish some tasks before i leave in 15 days, in addition, it was planed to conclude few projects with my clients, but it wasn't actually the case, i was obliged to stay at home for around 14 days due to my parent's sickness, both my father and my mother had the corona virus, for that reason i had to isolate myself all this period fear of being infected and waiting for the test result which was negative thanks to god. as a result, i couldn't finish all my duties at time, and now i must add few days to complete everything. I would appreciate it if you could postpone the date, and i will have the honor if you give me the chance to attend and join your huge group, as i promise that i will do all my best in order not to cause any delay even if i had to work extra hours or some weekends. Iam very grateful for your consideration. sincerely, Chabou amal
Dear sir/madame,

Iam
afraid to
let
you know that unfortunately
iam
not going to be able to
start
my new job at the sales management department on the
agreed
date which is
november
15, due to
some
circumstances beyond me.
i
really
hope you consider my situation
favorably
.

Let
me
explain
my situation in more
details
, as
i
have already mentioned in the interview,
i
haven't quit my
curent
job
yet
,
because
i
had to finish
some
tasks
before
i
leave
in 15 days,
in addition
, it
was planed
to conclude
few projects with my clients,
but
it wasn't actually the case,
i
was obliged
to stay at home for around 14 days due to my parent's sickness, both my father and my mother had the
corona virus
, for that reason
i
had to isolate myself all this period fear of
being infected
and waiting for the
test
result which was
negative
thanks to god.
as
a result,
i
couldn't finish all my duties at time, and
now
i
must
add
few days to complete everything.

I would appreciate it if you could postpone the date, and
i
will have the honor if you give me the chance to attend and
join
your huge group, as
i
promise that
i
will do all my best in order not to cause any delay even if
i
had to work extra hours or
some
weekends.

Iam
very
grateful for your consideration.

sincerely
,

Chabou
amal
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IELTS letter You successfully passed a job interview, you are expected to Start on november 15, but you will be not available on that date. Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and Suggesting a solution

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
241 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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