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Dear Sally; I am writing this letter regarding to english language course which I purchased from the online website of your school recently I read so many good reviews about the language course your school provided and I am so willing to start to start the course, but unfortunatelly I am having a serious health problem now and my doctor is not recommending to have any kind of physical activity for a while as I got little surgergy operation on my leg, so that, it seems I will not be able to attend the course scheduled for next week I kindly wanted to inform you about my situation that I will probably be attending course after two weeks, so I would be appreciated that if you can arrange the course start day according to my attendancy Sincerely; Yetis Kilic.

Dear Sally; I am writing this letter regarding to english language course which I purchased from the online website of your school recently I read so many good reviews about the language course your school provided and I am so willing to start to start the course, but unfortunatelly I am having a serious health problem now and my doctor is not recommending to have any kind of physical activity for a while as I got little surgergy operation on my leg, so that, it seems I will not be able to attend the course scheduled for next week I kindly wanted to inform you about my situation that I will probably be attending course after two weeks, so I would be appreciated that if you can arrange the course start day according to my attendancy Sincerely; Yetis Kilic. lDVX
Dear Sally; I am writing this letter regarding to english language course which I purchased from the online website of your school recently I read so many good reviews about the language course your school provided and I am so willing to start to start the course, but unfortunatelly I am having a serious health problem now and my doctor is not recommending to have any kind of physical activity for a while as I got little surgergy operation on my leg, so that, it seems I will not be able to attend the course scheduled for next week I kindly wanted to inform you about my situation that I will probably be attending course after two weeks, so I would be appreciated that if you can arrange the course start day according to my attendancy Sincerely; Yetis Kilic
Dear Sally;

I am writing this letter
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regarding to
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english
language
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course
which I
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purchased
from the online website of your school recently

I read
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many
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good
reviews about the language
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course
your school
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provided and
I am
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so
willing to
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to
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the
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,
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but
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unfortunatelly
I am having a serious health problem
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now
and my doctor is not
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recommending to have
any kind of physical activity for a while as I
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got
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little
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surgergy
operation on my leg,
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so
that, it seems I will not be able to attend the
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course
scheduled for
next
week

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I
kindly wanted to inform you about my situation that I will
probably
be attending
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course
after two weeks,
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so
I would
be appreciated
that if you can arrange the
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course
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start
day according to my
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attendancy


Sincerely
;

Yetis
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Kilic
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IELTS letter Dear Sally; I am writing this letter regarding to english language course which I purchased from the online website of your school recently I read so many good reviews about the language course your school provided and I am so willing to start to start the course, but unfortunatelly I am having a serious health problem now and my doctor is not recommending to have any kind of physical activity for a while as I got little surgergy operation on my leg, so that, it seems I will not be able to attend the course scheduled for next week I kindly wanted to inform you about my situation that I will probably be attending course after two weeks, so I would be appreciated that if you can arrange the course start day according to my attendancy Sincerely; Yetis Kilic.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
138 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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