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You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter

You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter OanN
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I decided to sell my 1861 Rolex watch which is given by my lovely grandfather. I have seen your add in the local newspaper about antique watch collection of 2021. The reason I planned to sell this watch, due to pandemic affected my business and I lost all my investors as well. To avoid the mortgage I wanted to sell the watch, which was given by grandfather for my 18th birthday. The age of the Rolex in 30 now and its absolutely fine without any scratches on it. About the price rate, considering its condition, quality and market value, I am expecting average amount of 50, 000 rupees for it. I have also attached watch picture along with this email. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Aarthi J
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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let
you know that I decided to sell my 1861 Rolex
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watch
which is
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given
by my lovely grandfather. I have
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seen
your
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add in
the local newspaper about antique
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watch
collection of 2021.

The reason I planned to sell this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
, due to pandemic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
my business and I lost all my investors
as well
. To avoid the mortgage I wanted to sell the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
, which was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
by grandfather for my 18th birthday. The age of the Rolex in 30
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and its
absolutely
fine without any scratches on it.

About the price rate, considering its condition, quality and market value, I am expecting average amount of 50, 000 rupees for it. I have
also
attached
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
picture along with this email.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Aarthi
J

IELTS letter You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter

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  American English
6 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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