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You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter

You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter OanN

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I decided to sell my 1861 Rolex watch which is given by my lovely grandfather. I have seen your add in the local newspaper about antique watch collection of 2021. The reason I planned to sell this watch, due to pandemic affected my business and I lost all my investors as well. To avoid the mortgage I wanted to sell the watch, which was given by grandfather for my 18th birthday. The age of the Rolex in 30 now and its absolutely fine without any scratches on it. About the price rate, considering its condition, quality and market value, I am expecting average amount of 50, 000 rupees for it. I have also attached watch picture along with this email. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Aarthi J

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