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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take kqVR
Dear Brijesh, I hope you are doing well. I received your letter yesterday, concerning the noise from my house on Sunday night. Actually, this Sunday was my wife's birthday and I had planned a surprise party for her. At this party, I had called my cousins and nephews for celebrating her birthday. So, on this occasion, we had a dance party and also played card games at my home. and while playing the games we were sometimes making loud noises and also singing songs loudly. I want to apologise for this consequence you caused, and I will make sure to not repeat this mistake again in future. If we had any party at my home in future, I will make sure to wrap up the party as early as possible. Moreover, I will also make a note to all my family members in advance to enjoy the party without making loud noises. Yours faithfully, Jiten
Dear
Brijesh
,

I hope you are doing well. I received your letter yesterday, concerning the noise from my
house
on Sunday night.

Actually, this Sunday was my wife's birthday and I had planned a surprise
party
for her. At this
party
, I had called my cousins and nephews for celebrating her birthday.
So
, on this occasion, we had a dance
party
and
also
played card games at my home.
and
while playing the games we were
sometimes
making loud noises and
also
singing songs
loudly
.

I want to
apologise
for this consequence you caused, and I will
make
sure to not repeat this mistake again
in future
.

If we had any
party
at my home
in future
, I will
make
sure to wrap up the
party
as early as possible.
Moreover
, I will
also
make
a note to all my family members in advance to enjoy the
party
without making loud noises.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jiten
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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