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You recently ordered an item of clothing through a store's website. When you received it, you discovered that it was not the same item that you had ordered. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, describe the item you ordered explain what was wrong with the item that you received say what you would like the manager to do

You recently ordered an item of clothing through a store's website. When you received it, you discovered that it was not the same item that you had ordered. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, describe the item you ordered explain what was wrong with the item that you received say what you would like the manager to do 50en
Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your notice, a wrong item dispatched to me after placing an order on your online store. I had purchased a T-shirt on your online shop, on 29th March 2021. I opted for a 'small' size with colour black. The quantity that I purchased was, 2 T-shirts. I received the delivery this morning and, when I opened the package I was disappointed to see two grey T-shirts. Although, the size of the clothes is 'small', the colour is not the same, I had selected while placing the order. One of the button of the T-shirt was missing and was torn. On this account, I would like to request the store manager to take a cognizance of this incorrect order as soon as possible and, send me the correct coloured T-shirts. I am hoping that the turn around time would be very quick. While replacing the product, please send it to the address mentioned in my previous order. Thanking you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Tom
Dear Sir,

I am writing to bring to your notice, a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
item dispatched to me after placing an order on your online store. I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
T-shirt
on your online shop, on 29th March 2021.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
opted for a '
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
' size with
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
black. The quantity that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
was, 2 T-shirts.

I received the delivery this morning and, when I opened the package I
was disappointed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
two
Possible spelling mistake. 'grey' is British English.
grey
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
T-shirts
. Although, the size of the clothes is '
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
', the
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
is not the same, I had selected while placing the order. One of the button of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
T-shirt
was missing and
was torn
.

On this account, I would like to request the store manager to take a cognizance of this incorrect order as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible and,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the correct
Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.
coloured
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
T-shirts
. I am hoping that the turn around time would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
quick. While replacing the product,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it to the address mentioned in my previous order.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours
Sincerely
, Tom
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IELTS letter You recently ordered an item of clothing through a store's website. When you received it, you discovered that it was not the same item that you had ordered. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, describe the item you ordered explain what was wrong with the item that you received say what you would like the manager to do

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