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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Dave, Sorry for not responding to you sooner. I did not check my mailbox yesterday as I arrived home late due to heavy extra work at the office. To be honest, we did not think that the noise would reach your home as we already have a noise control system installed. My sister played loud music with her teen friends celebrating their great performance in their final examination. I feel extremely guilty for disturbing your sleep and I am feeling even sadder for affecting your son's exam preparation. I should have verified the noise control system before raising the volume of speakers. The shop assistant where we bought a noise control system from guaranteed us that it works perfectly and we also tested it at the shop. The system worked perfectly at the store. Hence, we did not verify its performance at home after installation. I assure you that this will not repeat again. I am going to call the store to check noise control equipment functionality. Thank you so much for complaining to the cops. Apologies again. Take care, Rachel
Dear Dave,

Sorry for not responding to you sooner. I did not
check
my mailbox yesterday as I arrived home late due to heavy extra work at the office.

To be honest, we did not
think
that the
noise
would reach your home as we already have a
noise
control
system
installed. My sister played loud music with her teen friends celebrating their great performance in their final examination.

I feel
extremely
guilty for disturbing your
sleep and
I am feeling even sadder for affecting your son's exam preparation. I should have verified the
noise
control
system
before
raising the volume of speakers.

The shop assistant where we
bought
a
noise
control
system
from guaranteed us that it works
perfectly and
we
also
tested
it at the shop. The
system
worked
perfectly
at the store.
Hence
, we did not verify its performance at home after installation.

I assure you that this will not
repeat again
. I am going to call the store to
check
noise
control
equipment functionality. Thank you
so
much for complaining to the cops. Apologies again.

Take care,

Rachel
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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