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Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter apologise for not meeting him/her explain why you did not contact him/her earlier suggest a time and place to meet in the future

Dear Jacob Hi, how are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing this letter to apologize for that I could not contact you beforehand last Friday. I am truely sorry that I made you keep waiting for me. I suppose you'd be mad at me now since I made you alone for a long time in the restuarant where we're supposed to meet. Yet, I couldn't call or text you all at. Since it was my business trip, I had to visit my buyers' company first and have a meeting with them. Yet, there was a little problem between our company and them while negociating. Thus, The meeting ran long so I couldn't make it. But, even worse thing was that I lost my cellphone on the way that I was heading to the company on the afternoon. so, I could not find any way to reach out to you at all. Since it was all my fault, I'd like to make it up to you. Let me buy you the fanciest dinner at the poshest restaurant in your town. I think I have to visit your city again due to business issue on the upcoming Friday. I hope that this will make you feel better and see you on next Friday. Regards, Eunmi Park
Dear Jacob

Hi, how are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing this letter to apologize for that I could not contact you beforehand last Friday.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
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truely
sorry that I made you
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keep
waiting for me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
suppose you'd be mad at me
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now
since I made you alone for a long time in the
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restuarant
where we're supposed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
.
Yet
, I couldn't call or text you all at.

Since it was my business trip, I had to visit my buyers'
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
first
and have a meeting with them.
Yet
, there was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
problem between our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and them while
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negociating
.
Thus
, The meeting ran long
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so
I couldn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, even worse thing was that I lost my cellphone on the way that I was heading to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
The usual preposition for “afternoon” is “in”, not “on”. Try it like this: “in the afternoon”.
on the afternoon
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
so
, I could not find any way to reach out to you at all.

Since it was all my fault, I'd like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up to you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
you the fanciest dinner at the poshest restaurant in your town. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
visit your city again due to business issue on the upcoming Friday.

I hope that this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you feel better and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you on
next
Friday.

Regards,

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Eunmi
Park
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IELTS letter Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter apologise for not meeting him/her explain why you did not contact him/her earlier suggest a time and place to meet in the future

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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