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Write a letter at least 150 words. You work from home and a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for job. Describe the problem with the equipment and explain how this effect your work and what should company do

Letter for requesting maintance or replaced my printer. I am working from home and I am facing problem with company printer. Firstly, it’s a company device which I was using for work at home. It was allocated to me three month ago. Previously, it was working fine. Suddenly, it start making troubles. At the moment, if I try to print something the paper stuck in it. I had no idea why it is doing it? I had tried various method to resolve the issue but resulted in failure. Additionally, it is effecting my daily task for the job. I am unable to print from home consequently, many of the office work is in pending. I need to print some companies forms for client urgently. Please arrange someone from maintance department to come to my home and have a look. Otherwise, just replace it with new one. I can buy new printer from local shop and then company can adjust the payment in my next pay. Alternatively, company can organise new printer for me.
Letter for requesting
maintance
or replaced my printer. I am working from
home and
I am facing problem with
company
printer.
Firstly
, it’s a
company
device which I was using for work at home. It
was allocated
to me three
month
ago. Previously, it was working fine.
Suddenly
, it
start
making troubles. At the moment, if I try to print something the paper stuck in it. I had no
idea
why it is doing it? I had tried various method to resolve the issue
but
resulted in failure.
Additionally
, it is effecting my daily task for the job. I am unable to print from home
consequently
,
many
of the office work is in pending. I need to print
some
companies
forms for client
urgently
.
Please
arrange someone from
maintance
department to
come
to my home and have a look.
Otherwise
,
just
replace it with new one. I can
buy
new printer from local shop and then
company
can adjust the payment in my
next
pay.
Alternatively
,
company
can
organise
new printer for me.
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IELTS letter Write a letter at least 150 words. You work from home and a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for job. Describe the problem with the equipment and explain how this effect your work and what should company do

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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