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Write a letter to the local authority for requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area.In your letter. Mention about the current sports facilities available. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced. How the new facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

Dear Sir/Madam My name is Joe on working as an engineer in Atlas copco private limited. I am writing this letter to address an immediate attention for the requirement of additional sports facility in hillwood area of. Currently the sports facility available in the locality become insufficient for the group of more than 8 members, as you know about the restricted area of this particular facilitate playing cricket and football is banned the additional sports facility can be introduced in year by the Saint Peter's school auditorium because there are eight thousand square feet of unused land available for the facility. which is more suited for the active sports like football and cricket. The area is sufficient for the for a football or cricket events that can be a fundraiser to the local sports authority the requirement of new President a is inevitable because of the large number of young talented sports enthusiastic. we are the team of 40 members under the age of 35 years old. The introduction of new sports facility will leverage our sportsman spirit and Team spirit ful stop moreover this activity will be reduced our day-to-day work stress and improve the productivity

Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Joe on working as an engineer in Atlas Possible spelling mistake found.cococop co
copco
 private limited. I am writing this letter to address an immediate attention for the requirement of additional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facility in Possible spelling mistake found.hill wood
hillwood
 area of. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facility available in the locality become insufficient for the group of more than 8 members, as you know about the restricted area of this particular facilitate playing cricket and football is banned


the additional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facility can be introduced
 in year by the Saint Peter's school auditorium This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there are eight thousand square feet of unused land available for the facility. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Which
which
 is more suited for the active You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 like football and cricket. The area is sufficient for the for a football or cricket This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 that can be a fundraiser to the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 authority

the requirement of new President Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.an
a
 is inevitable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the large number of young talented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 enthusiastic. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.We
we
 are the team of 40 members under the age of 35 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. The introduction of new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facility will leverage our sportsman spirit and Team spirit Possible spelling mistake found.fullfuelfunfurfoulflu
ful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
moreover
 this activity will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 our day-to-day work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.productivity.productivity!productivity?productivity:productivity,productivity;
productivity