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Business email to the manager

Business email to the manager 0gbQ
For almost three or four days, I have not been able to write to you. I have some reasons because I did have so much stuff to do. As an audit intern, there are so many tasks to complete. I couldn’t leave the workplace at 6 pm. Only I can leave the workplace on time since I have a university lesson. Generally, March is a bit difficult month. From January until May is called a busy season. We as a company have to meet the deadline for the financial statements of companies. However, I am happy with that. At this age, I should work hard to get better results as well as to reach my goals. Beyond this, I have great news for you. My groupmate has got an Erasmus+ scholarship and will go to Italy next semester. To celebrate this, we have met yesterday. We have eaten a kebab, and go to the Sahil. After that, we have drunk tea. This was a good time for both of us. Hope it will be good for her. Now I am going to finish this essay, later I will come back again.
For almost three or four days, I have not been able to write to you. I have
some
reasons
because
I did have
so
much stuff to do. As an audit intern, there are
so
many
tasks to complete. I couldn’t
leave
the workplace at 6 pm.
Only
I can
leave
the workplace on time since I have a university lesson.
Generally
, March is a bit difficult month. From January until May
is called
a busy season. We as a
company
have to
meet
the deadline for the financial statements of
companies
.
However
, I am happy with that. At this age, I should work
hard
to
get
better results
as well
as to reach my goals.

Beyond this, I have great news for you. My
groupmate
has
got
an Erasmus+ scholarship and will go to Italy
next
semester. To celebrate this, we have met yesterday. We have eaten a kebab, and go to the
Sahil
. After that, we have drunk tea. This was a
good
time for both of us. Hope it will be
good
for her.

Now
I am going to finish this essay, later I will
come
back again.
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IELTS letter Business email to the manager

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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