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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take ae5G
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in response to your complaint letter about the noise from my house. I have been doing rehearsal for my college event and it is the main cause of the noise. I feel that I have to explain myself and humbly ask for a forgiveness. I have been practicing dance for the dance competition that going to happen in my college, whereas, the college haven't provided place to do rehearsal. As a result, at the moment, I am doing rehearsal at my place. I was unable to reduce the volume in audio player, this is the aerial root of the noise. After, I received a letter from you, I felt bad, in the consequence, I have replaced my old music player in Amazon. I promise you this will not happen in the future. I once again apologize for the trouble caused, besides, I appreciate you for not giving this problem a legal action from your end. Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in response to your complaint letter about the noise from my
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house
. I have been doing rehearsal for my college
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event
and it is the main cause of the noise.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
feel that I
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have to
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explain
myself and
humbly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
a forgiveness.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been practicing dance for the dance competition that going to happen in my college, whereas, the college haven't provided place to do rehearsal.
As a result
, at the moment, I am doing rehearsal at my place. I was unable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the volume in audio player, this is the aerial root of the noise.

After, I received a letter from you, I felt
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
, in the consequence, I have replaced my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
music player
The usual collocation for "Amazon" is "on". Did you mean "on Amazon"?
in Amazon
. I promise you this will not happen in the future.

I once again apologize for the trouble caused,
besides
, I appreciate you for not giving this problem a legal action from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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