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You are planning a week-long vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor and tell them that you are going away. In your letter, you should: • ask them to take care of your house • explain why you will be away.

You are planning a week-long vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor and tell them that you are going away. In your letter, you should: • ask them to take care of your house • explain why you will be away. dx6p
Dear sharan, I hope you and your families are fine, I am writing this letter to ask your help. I want to inform you that I would be not hearing for 2 weeks. I just request you to keep a eye on my house. Because, there is theft problem increased now-a-days in our location. Moreover, if postman bring any important letters kindly keep those with you. In addition if any of relatives come to my house just inform them we went somewhere. Although, I have huge work in my office I need to go to my hometown. Because, my father is not well. Furthermore, he needs my support in this situation. Hence, I made plan to visit my hometown for 2 weeks with my complete family. I hope you consider my request as well as cooperate to me. Best regards, Santhoshi.
Dear
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sharan
,

I hope you and your families are fine, I am writing this letter to ask your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
. I want to inform you that I would
The verb 'hearing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be not hearing
for 2 weeks.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
eye on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
, there is theft problem increased
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
-a-days in our location.
Moreover
, if postman bring any
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
letters kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
those with you. In
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
addition
if any of relatives
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
inform them we went somewhere.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, I have huge work in my office I need to go to my hometown.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
, my father is not well.
Furthermore
, he needs my support in this situation.
Hence
, I made plan to visit my hometown for 2 weeks with my complete family.

I hope you consider my request
as well
as cooperate to me.

Best regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Santhoshi
.

IELTS letter You are planning a week-long vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor and tell them that you are going away. In your letter, you should: • ask them to take care of your house • explain why you will be away.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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