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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. ng8o
Dear Mr Smith, My name is Pranith Sriram. I live in Wesley chapel. I was the one who you saved 6 months ago near Heathrow Airport Road. This letter is regarding conveying thankful notes for saving my life. I whole heartedly offer my gratitude and thanks to you. Nothing can be exchanged for the help that you have given to me. This is kind of new life you provided to me. I would like to Invite you and your whole family to visit my Home any time you wish to come. As as token of my deepest regards please do accept this chocolate hamper and flowers. Really Looking forward to meet you. Willing to catch up for Lunch on Sunday. Yours Sincerely, Prince Lauren
Dear Mr Smith,

My name is
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Pranith
Sriram. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in Wesley chapel. I was the one who you saved 6 months ago near Heathrow Airport Road. This letter is regarding conveying thankful notes for saving my life.

I whole
heartedly
offer my gratitude and thanks to you. Nothing can
be exchanged
for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
that you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to me. This is kind of new life you provided to me.

I would like to Invite you and your whole family to visit my Home any time you wish to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
.
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As as
token of my deepest regards
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do accept this chocolate hamper and flowers.
Really
Looking forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.

Willing to catch up for Lunch on Sunday.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Prince Lauren

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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