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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take YpaN
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to formally apologize for the noise came from my flat yesterday. I will explain you what caused this disturbing act to happen. I had arranged a party at my home and invited some family members to celebrate a birthday party of my newborn baby. For the arrangements, I booked services from a catering company to decorate the hall. To fulfill the job, employees had to drill in the wall to fix the required tool. In course of performing their work while using the drill machine, an irritating sound came our when the labor were drilling in the wall, which caused an annoying sound and created disturbance. Please accept my deepest apology for this act as I can imagine, how disturbing the drilling sound would be as it is always quite, and peaceful environment in the common area of our floor. To ensure that this act not happen again, I have decided that in future, if any arrangements have to be done in my flat, which could create little bit of noise, I will consult first with all my neighbors about their preferred time and date, so that there would not be any kind of problem further. I hope you will accept my apology after getting aware of the situation. Yours faithfully, Rameez khalid
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to
formally
apologize for the noise came from my flat yesterday.

I will
explain
you
what caused this disturbing act to happen.
I
had arranged a party at my home and invited
some
family members to celebrate a birthday party of my newborn baby. For the arrangements, I booked services from a catering
company
to decorate the hall. To fulfill the job, employees had to drill in the wall to
fix
the required tool. In course of performing their work while using the drill machine, an irritating sound came our when the labor were drilling in the wall, which caused an annoying sound and created disturbance.

Please
accept my deepest apology for this act as I can imagine, how disturbing the drilling sound would be as it is always quite, and peaceful environment in the common area of our floor.

To ensure that this act not happen again, I have decided that
in future
, if any arrangements
have to
be done
in my flat, which could create
little bit
of noise, I will consult
first
with all my neighbors about their preferred time and date,
so
that there would not be any kind of problem
further
.

I hope you will accept my apology after getting aware of the situation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rameez
khalid
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take

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  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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