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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course rjE6
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to an enquiry about the computer course (ICFS45879) which is going to start this summer. I always been interested to learn how to work on machine learning. I am working on a project and it requires me to understand the advance concepts of machine learning. I would like to enroll in this course. I am very quick to learn and understand the concepts quick. Although, I don't have a formal elementary studies on machine learning, I am still interested to move forward with this course. In the brouchere, one of the basic requirements were that, I should have completed an elementary course on machine learning. I would like to know, if there are any exepections could be made. If not, I request can any special permission be given to me to take up this course. I would really be grateful if you could reply me at the earliest. Yours Sincerely, Jack
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to an
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enquiry
about the computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
(ICFS45879) which is going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
this summer. I always
been interested
to learn how to work on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
learning.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am working on a project and it requires me to understand the advance concepts of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
learning.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to enroll in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
quick to learn and understand the concepts quick. Although, I don't have a formal elementary studies on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
learning, I am
still
interested to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
forward with this course.

In the
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brouchere
, one of the basic requirements were that, I should have completed an elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
learning. I would like to know
If " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it.
, if
there are any
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exepections
could
be made
. If not, I request can any special permission be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to me to take up this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I would
really
be grateful if you could reply me at the earliest.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Jack

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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