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You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter Explain what type of car you would like Give details of when you would like the car Request more information about the cost

You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter Explain what type of car you would like Give details of when you would like the car Request more information about the cost dR66

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to rent a car for holiday. I am going to visit London next month for a month thus I am looking for rental car. First of all, I am going on holidays with my family and my daughter is 3 years old. Therefore, I am looking for seven seater car with appropriate heating facility. I am aware that London's weather is quite cold thus car heating is necessary. Also, I just got my driving licence, and I am still new for automatic car. If possible could be please help me with the make and model of the car and which automatic system comes along with this. If I have a brochure with me it would be great help. My flight will be on 15th December, so if you can arrange the car to drop at my hotel it will be highly appreciated. I will keep the car with me till 14th January and I will make necessary arrangements to park the car on given location. Please send me quotation of various cars along with their rental price. Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Darek Jones

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to rent a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 for holiday. I am going to visit London next
 month for a month thus
 I am looking for rental car.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I am going on holidays with my family and my daughter is 3 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. Therefore
, I am looking for seven seater Possible agreement error. The noun 'car' seems to be countable, so consider using: "cars".cars
car
 with appropriate heating facility. I am aware that London's weather is quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
thus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 heating is necessary. Also
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my driving Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.license
licence
, and I am still
 new for automatic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. If possible could be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 and model of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 and which automatic system This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 along with this. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I have a brochure with me it would be great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

My flight will be on 15th December, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 if you can arrange the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 to drop at my hotel it will be highly
 appreciated. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 with me till 14th January and I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 necessary arrangements to park the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 location. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me quotation of various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 along with their rental price.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully
,

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