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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter i) describe what you enjoyed about the course ii) say how much cooking you've done since the course iii) suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer qj95
Dear Sir or Madam,
As requested, I would like to share my feedback for the course "Basics of cooking" which I attended this summer. The duration of the course was perfect to get someone started with cooking. I enjoyed it thoroughly even though I had no prior knowledge of it.
The instructor "Miss Mary" of the course was very patient. At times, I had asked some silly questions but she explained those in a very calm manner. The quick breakfast meals is something which I liked the most.
After completing the course I have been cooking breakfast daily for my family. They are also enjoying having different cuisines for their breakfast. I have also started to explore some large meals with the help of youtube videos.
While going through videos I have gained some interest in baking. However, I noticed that the school does not offer a course on that yet. I feel it will be a great addition to the courses you provide.
Yours faithfully,
Ishpreet Kaur
Dear Sir or Madam,
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter i) describe what you enjoyed about the course ii) say how much cooking you've done since the course iii) suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
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