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Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say -Describe the problem - how is it effecting your work - what needs to be done about it

Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say -Describe the problem - how is it effecting your work - what needs to be done about it RBpM
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to direct your attention towards multiple faults related to my desktop station that i am experiencing very frequently since last one month. To give you an insight of the problem, let me elaborate that my desktop station becomes dead slow very often and it almost stop working. Mostly it stuck, s in the middle of a task and keep in this position unless i restart it which results in loosing all of my work. In this scenario i have to perform all of my tasks once again which consumes quite a lot of time resulting in missing some important deadlines. It is badly effecting our department KPI, s, consequently tarnishing reputation of our department. If we miss the deadline of one project, it will delay all of our upcoming project. It would be great if you refer this issue towards the IT department and request them to resolve this problem once for all. There are couple of suggestions that we can recommend which includes but not limited to increasing RAM of our system and hard disk capacity which will increase space in C drive and resolves the issue of hanging. Hopefully after taking these corrective steps by IT team, we would be in a better position to finish our projects well within targeted time frame. Sincerely A R S
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to direct your attention towards multiple faults related to my desktop station that
i
am experiencing
very
frequently
since last one month.

To give you an insight of the problem,
let
me elaborate that my desktop station becomes dead slow
very
often
and it almost
stop
working.
Mostly
it stuck, s in the middle of a task and
keep
in this position unless
i
restart it which results in loosing all of my work.

In this scenario
i
have to
perform all of my tasks once again which consumes quite
a lot of
time resulting in missing
some
important
deadlines. It is
badly
effecting our department KPI, s,
consequently
tarnishing reputation of our department. If we miss the deadline of one project, it will delay all of our upcoming project.

It would be great if you refer this issue towards the IT department and request them to resolve this problem once for all. There are
couple of
suggestions that we can recommend which includes
but
not limited to increasing RAM of our system and
hard
disk capacity which will increase space in C drive and resolves the issue of hanging.

Hopefully
after taking these corrective steps by IT team, we would be in a better position to finish our projects well within targeted time frame.

Sincerely


A R S
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say -Describe the problem - how is it effecting your work - what needs to be done about it

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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