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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sean, We decided to refurbish some parts of our house and during the refurbishment the workers have to use electrical equipments. These equipments make really loud noise which I am sure is not music to ears. This unpleasant noise bothers all of my family members and as you complained it is causing problems to you as well. I would like to apologise for the noise pollution created by our house refurbishment plan because I should've given the notice in advance about our plans. In our defence, we didn't get enough time to think about informing our neighbours, especially you as your house is the closest to us. We have to get this done as soon as possible because of the upcoming winter holidays. To deal with this noise, me and my family members are currently using earplugs, so to help you with this we will buy your family the same earplugs tonight and give it you. I understand that this won't completely solve the problem but we are all ears in case you still find it uncomfortable to deal with this loud noise. Your concerned neighbour, Ankur Sharma
Dear Sean,

We decided to refurbish
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some
parts of our
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house
and during the refurbishment the workers
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have to
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use
electrical equipments. These equipments
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make
really
loud
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noise
which I am sure is not music to ears. This unpleasant
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noise
bothers all of my family members and as you complained it is causing problems to you
as well
.

I would like to
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apologise
for the
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noise
pollution created by our
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house
refurbishment plan
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because
I should've
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given
the notice in advance about our plans. In our
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defence
, we didn't
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get
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enough
time to
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think
about informing our
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neighbours
,
especially
you as your
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house
is the closest to us. We
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have to
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get
this done as
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soon
as possible
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because
of the upcoming winter holidays.

To deal with this
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noise
, me and my family members are
currently
using earplugs,
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so
to
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help
you with this we will
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buy
your family the same earplugs tonight and give it you. I understand that this won't completely solve the problem
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but
we are all ears in case you
still
find it uncomfortable to deal with this loud noise.

Your concerned
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,

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Ankur
Sharma

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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