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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it  very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter * describe the situation * explain your problems and why it is difficult to work * say what kind of accommodation you would prefer x7jN

Dear Sir, I am writing to you to complain about my accommodation situation. I currently share room 209 with Mark Adams, a freshmen with an undeclared major. Given the fact that this is Mark's first year in collage and away from his parents, I try my best to be understanding and help him settle in. However, Mark has mistaken my kindness and rather than be thankful, is trying to abuse it. Instead of sharing our current space equally, Mark has expanded his area to reach my own closet, drawer, and in some cases my bed. He claims that he has more stuff, and therefore needs more space, leaving me with an extremely small area to place my belongings. He also as a tendency to invite friends over. They stay up all night, play games, and sing in loud irritating voices to music. Such behaviours makes it extremely hard for me to study, concentrate or even sleep in my own room. I am a senior on the verge of graduating and it is extremely important to me to be able to study and finish my assignments in a quiet and peaceful place. I would like to switch to any available room with a well behaved and more considerate roommate, or have Mark move out with a roommate his age. that way I will be able to be more productive and maintain a steady sleep schedule I believe that Zack in room 230 has an extra bed in his room, and since we are both seniors of the same major I believe it would be a perfect fit for me and that he would not mind it. I hope that you truly consider my request or help me find a better solution. Sincerely, Dave Smith

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to complain about my accommodation situation. I currently
 share You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 209 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreakimpressionpointstampsymbolspot
Mark
 Adams, Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a freshman" or simply "freshmen"?a freshmanfreshmen
a freshmen
 with an undeclared major. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 the fact that this is Mark's first
 year in collage and away from his parents, I try my best to The verb 'understanding' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be understanding
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 him settle in. However
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreakimpressionpointstampsymbolspot
Mark
 has mistaken my kindness and rather
 than be thankful, is trying to abuse it.

Instead
 of sharing our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 space equally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreakimpressionpointstampsymbolspot
Mark
 has expanded his area to reach my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 closet, drawer, and in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cases my bed. He claims that he has more stuff, and therefore
 needs more space, leaving me with an extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 area to place my belongings. He also
 as a tendency to invite friends over. They stay up all night, play games, and sing in loud irritating voices to music. Such Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviours' is British English.behaviors
behaviours
You should probably use "make".make
makes
 it extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for me to study, concentrate or even sleep in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. I am a senior on the verge of graduating and it is extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to me to be able to study and finish my assignments in a quiet and peaceful place.

I would like to switch to any available You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-behaved
well behaved
 and more considerate roommate, or have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreakimpressionpointstampsymbolspot
Mark
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 out with a roommate his age. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
 way I will be able to be more productive and maintain a steady sleep schedule I believe that Zack in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 230 has an extra bed in his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, and since we are both seniors of the same major I believe it would be a perfect fit for me and that he would not mind it.

I hope that you truly
 consider my request or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me find a better solution.

Sincerely
,

Dave Smith