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change the room of collage.

change the room of collage. 7dmy

Dear sir or madam I’m writing to ask if I could please be given another room in college. At present I share a room with another student who, unfortunately, is very noisy This makes it very difficult for me to study. I have asked this student on many occassions to let me work quietly but there has been no change. He plays his radio or watches TV constantly and often invites friend round for partys which last till late in the night. I have tried working in the library but it is not open at all the times I need. I am very woried about this situation, as I have to finish my final year project this term and have my final exams coming up at the end of the year. I would be most greatful if you could please give me a room by myself or a room sharing with a student who is quiet. I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your helps. Your faithfully Jan Hutt

Dear sir or madam

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please
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given
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 in college.

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occassions
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let
 me work quietly
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but
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change
. He plays his radio or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
watches
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often
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partys
 which last till late in the night.

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but
 it is not open at all the times I need. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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woried
 about this situation, as I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 finish my final year project this term and have my final exams coming up at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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greatful
 if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 give me a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 by myself or a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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 sharing with a student who is quiet.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
.

Your faithfully


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