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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear neighbors, I know that these days you had a problem with the noise of my dog and it made you uncomfortable. The bark of my dogs is too loud. I found it noisy and vexatious. It seems that my dog has a problem with her newborn babies and felt sick, the mentioned reasons made her irate and she starts to bark several times in the night. I will take her to the veterinarian for a check up and bring her for the treatment. In the next few days, her puppies will be given to another person to take care of them, then the probability of getting rid of the noise would rise. If the treatment will not take effect I will bring my dog back to the previous owner. Another reason related to my party. It was our wedding ceremony and it was prepared for just about 5 people but suddenly our parents came to us to surprise us. I will promise you that this kind of thing will not happen again. We will end our parties sooner and will notify you about our schedule. I hope you accept my apologies and condolence to my dog. I will have a party to say sorry to all of you, it makes me happy if you come and join. kind regards, Mahsa Tajik
Dear neighbors,

I know that these days you had a problem with the noise of my
dog
and it made you uncomfortable. The bark of my
dogs
is too loud. I found it noisy and vexatious. It seems that my
dog
has a problem with her newborn babies and felt sick, the mentioned reasons made her irate and she
starts
to bark several times in the night. I will take her to the veterinarian for a
check
up and bring her for the treatment. In the
next
few days, her puppies will be
given
to another person to take care of them, then the probability of getting rid of the noise would rise. If the treatment will not take effect I will bring my
dog
back to the previous owner. Another reason related to my party. It was our wedding ceremony and it
was prepared
for
just
about 5
people
but
suddenly
our parents came to us to surprise us. I will promise you that this kind of thing will not happen again. We will
end
our parties sooner and will notify you about our schedule. I hope you accept my apologies and condolence to my
dog
. I will have a party to say sorry to all of you, it
makes
me happy if you
come
and
join
.

kind regards,

Mahsa Tajik
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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