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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take VbjD
Dear Mark, I have received your letter regarding the inconvenience you have had due to loud instrumental noise coming from my apartment during our practice session. As you are aware about my situation, I have to perform in live band next week and the building in which my studio is loacated was undergoing through major repairing. Due to that we are not permitted to visit there as major construction work was going on and it is risky to visit there. I feel extremely terrible to cause a disturbance to you, perticularly when you have just recovered from major accident. Please accept my apology for this, and I assure you I will be extra cautious about keeping volume down going forward. Also, from tomorrow I am going to practice at my studio as the contruction and repairing work is almost done by now and all the authority have given permission to all the members of buiding to resume their work there. In addition to this, I am also planning to install sound proof windows and door to my apartment. I hope you will accept my apology. Yours sincerly, ABC
Dear Mark,

I have received your letter regarding the inconvenience you have had due to loud instrumental noise coming from my apartment during our practice session. As you are aware about my situation, I
have to
perform in
live
band
next
week and the building in which my studio is
loacated
was undergoing through major repairing. Due to that we are not permitted to visit there as major construction work was going on and it is risky to visit there.

I feel
extremely
terrible to cause a disturbance to you,
perticularly
when you have
just
recovered from major accident.
Please
accept my apology for this, and I assure you I will be extra cautious about keeping volume down going forward.

Also
, from tomorrow I am going to practice at my studio as the
contruction
and repairing work is almost done by
now
and all the authority have
given
permission to all the members of
buiding
to resume their work there.
In addition
to this, I am
also
planning to install sound proof windows and door to my apartment.

I hope you will accept my apology.

Yours
sincerly
, ABC
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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