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Your item of value was lost on train. Write letter to railway company.

Your item of value was lost on train. Write letter to railway company. LpWG

The purpose of me writing this letter addressed to you is that I have lost an item of value on a train. I have lost my handbag when I boarded the train which was heading to Alberta. The incident happened with me on 9th March, 2021 that is on Sunday morning approximately around 9 am. I boarded the train at 8 am. I was expected to arrive at my destination by 9 am. Since it was weekend trains were crowded more than usual. I sat in C 21 compartment. The way I would describe my handbag is, its copper in colour. The material of my handbag is made of leather. There is a wallet inside my handbag. Also there are set of car keys tied with two key chain - one key chain is of a teddy bear and other key chain is company logo where in I am currently employed. It goes by the name Hastings Ltd. Other items include - a white handkerchief, a lipstick, my company photo ID, my driving license and my VISA debit card. I implore you to conduct a thorough search for my missing handbag as it not only contains essential items of daily use but also has a sentimental value since I have received it by way of a gift from my husband. I have lodged my complaint with station master. He in turn helped me by contacting TC but it was futile. I have attached my copy of ticket with this letter along with my address and contact number. In case if I am not reachable on the given contact I have also included emergency contact number of my husband if you find anything at all in regards to matter. Please let me know if there is a trail on anything. thank you regards daphne

The purpose of me writing this letter addressed to you is that I have lost an item of value on a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
train
. I have lost my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookleatherbackpackpursebagevening bag
handbag
 when I boarded the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
train
 which was heading to Alberta.

The incident happened The verb 'happen' usually requires the preposition "to".to
with
 me on 9th When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "March 2021".March 2021
March, 2021
that is
 on Sunday morning approximately around 9 am. I boarded the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
train
 at 8 am. I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to arrive at my destination by 9 am. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 it was weekend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
were crowded
 more than usual.

I sat in C 21 Possible agreement error. The noun 'compartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: "compartments".compartments
compartment
. The way I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookleatherbackpackpursebagevening bag
handbag
 is, its copper in Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
. The material of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookleatherbackpackpursebagevening bag
handbag
is made
 of leather. There is a wallet inside my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookleatherbackpackpursebagevening bag
handbag
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 there are set
 of car keys tied with two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmajorleadingindispensablecrucialprimaryvital
key
Possible agreement error. The noun 'chain' seems to be countable, so consider using: "chains".chains
chain
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmajorleadingindispensablecrucialprimaryvital
key
 chain is of a teddy bear and other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmajorleadingindispensablecrucialprimaryvital
key
 chain is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 logo where in I am currently
 employed. It goes by the name Hastings Ltd. Other items include Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 a white handkerchief, a lipstick, my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 photo ID, my driving license and my VISA debit card.

I implore you to conduct a thorough search for my missing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookleatherbackpackpursebagevening bag
handbag
 as it not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 contains essential items of daily This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 has a sentimental value since I have received it by way of a gift from my husband. I have lodged my complaint with station master. He in turn This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me by contacting TC This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was futile.

I have attached my copy of ticket with this letter along with my address and contact number. In case if I am not reachable on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 contact I have also
 included emergency contact number of my husband if you find anything at all Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 matter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if there is a trail on anything.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThank
thank
 you

regards Possible spelling mistake found.Daphne
daphne