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Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship program

I am submitting this motivation letter to support my application for the master’s degree program at Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship program to take the opportunity of improving scientific knowledge in the field of physics. During my study at Kazakh National University, I comprehended that engineering physics is not only the activity which is considered as development and optimization of new technology but also it is the putting into practice obtained experience with the aim of refining county, society or at least enhance the condition of life. For this purpose, I have chosen to apply for this program since I believe study in Hungary enables me to get a chance to develop diverse kinds of practices in physics. As far as my goal of studying in Hungary is concerned, it is obvious that to be a professional researcher at physics I should be informed how other countries gravitated to improve physical science and gain an opportunity to study abroad. Hence, I aimed to do a contribution to further enhancement of the sustainable development of Kazakhstan by acquired knowledge and experiences from a study in Hungary with the help of this Hungarian Government program. During the study at Kazakh National University, the Ministry of Education and Science of the Republic of Kazakhstan provided me a grant for studying abroad by exchange program as well as my academic performance was excellent. Such wise, I could receive significant experiences in Kaunas Technological University (Kaunas, Lithuania). Take, for instance, I taught subjects by different teaching methods which enabled looking at things from a different perspective, and living in another county could improve diverse kinds of skills such as adaptability, taking initiative, independent life. Moreover, I think interaction with various cultures is the most helpful thing to self-development. Therefore, I aimed to study and get experienced in Hungarian universities as well as I believe I am a worthy candidate with enough proficiency, knowledge, and abilities. Personally, I believe, this program can provide significant success in my future projects because I will get knowledge from the improved educational system and their skilled and experienced professors teach, thus it will be one of the greatest chances on the way of achievement. On the other hand, it will be better if I work in a team of internal consultants. It ensures a lot of beneficial attempt to improve our engineering sector. In the future, to stimulate the development of this sector in Kazakhstan I intend to take a good position in one of the representative organizations in Kazakhstan and set up their particular business expected to give services in the field of physics. I would like to use my stay in Hungary to additionally building up my capabilities in empirical research and beginning working on various projects. The potential outcome that gives me T Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship program I will use on benefit
I am submitting this motivation letter to support my application for the master’s degree
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at Stipendium
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Hungaricum
scholarship
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program
to take the opportunity of improving scientific
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knowledge
in the field of physics. During my
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study
at Kazakh National
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University
, I comprehended that engineering physics is not
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only
the activity which
is considered
as development and optimization of new technology
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but
also
it is the putting into practice obtained experience with the aim of refining county, society or at least enhance the condition of life. For this purpose, I have chosen to apply for this
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program
since I believe
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study
in Hungary enables me to
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get
a chance to develop diverse kinds of practices in physics.

As far as my goal of studying in Hungary
is concerned
, it is obvious that to be a professional researcher at physics I should
be informed
how other countries gravitated to
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improve
physical science and gain an opportunity to
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study
abroad.
Hence
, I aimed to do a contribution to
further
enhancement of the sustainable development of Kazakhstan by acquired
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knowledge
and experiences from a
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study
in Hungary with the
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help
of this Hungarian
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Government
program.

During the
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study
at Kazakh National
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University
, the Ministry of Education and Science of the Republic of Kazakhstan provided me a grant for studying abroad by exchange
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program
as well
as my academic performance was excellent. Such wise, I could receive significant experiences in Kaunas Technological
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University
(Kaunas, Lithuania). Take,
for instance
, I taught subjects by
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different
teaching methods which enabled looking at things from a
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different
perspective, and living in another county could
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improve
diverse kinds of
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skills
such as adaptability, taking initiative, independent life.
Moreover
, I
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think
interaction with various cultures is the most helpful thing to self-development.
Therefore
, I aimed to
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study
and
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get
experienced in Hungarian
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universities
as well
as I believe I am a worthy candidate with
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enough
proficiency,
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knowledge
, and abilities.

Personally
, I believe, this
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program
can provide significant success in my future projects
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because
I will
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get
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knowledge
from the
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improved
educational system and their skilled and experienced professors teach,
thus
it will be one of the greatest chances on the way of achievement.
On the other hand
, it will be better if I work in a team of internal consultants. It ensures
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a lot of beneficial attempt
to
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improve
our engineering sector. In the future, to stimulate the development of this sector in Kazakhstan I intend to take a
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good
position in one of the representative organizations in Kazakhstan and set up their particular business
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expected
to give services in the field of physics. I would like to
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use
my stay in Hungary to
additionally
building up my capabilities in empirical research and beginning working on various projects. The potential outcome that gives me T Stipendium
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Hungaricum
scholarship
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program
I will
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on
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benefit
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IELTS letter Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship program

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
472 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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