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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take GRYj
I am writing to explain why there hsa been loud noise at my house for the past couple of days. Due to the recent storm our house roof has been damaged. As we tried to fix the damage, we learnt about the cracks within the house walls which required urgent attention. In order to fix the walls and roof there has been loud construction noise. Firstly, I would like to apologise for the loud noise as the wall needs to be taken down and a new wall has to be built. It would take one week for the damage to be fixed as per the contractor. We are very sorry about the noise problem you have been facing since the past few days. I understand the construction noise would be disturbing and hence i would request the contractor to try reduce the noise along with working only during the office hours and not to work during the weekends. We regret to have caused any problems and try to fix it as soon as possible. Yours sincerely Omkar Kamath
I am writing to
explain
why there
hsa
been loud
noise
at my
house
for the past couple of days. Due to the recent storm our
house
roof has
been damaged
. As we tried to
fix
the damage, we
learnt
about the cracks within the
house
walls
which required urgent attention. In order to
fix
the
walls
and roof there has been loud construction noise.

Firstly
, I would like to
apologise
for the loud
noise
as the
wall
needs to
be taken
down and a new
wall
has to
be built
. It would take one week for the damage to be
fixed
as per the contractor. We are
very
sorry about the
noise
problem you have been facing since the past few days.

I understand the construction
noise
would be disturbing and
hence
i
would request the contractor to try
reduce
the
noise
along with working
only
during the office hours and not to work during the weekends. We
regret to have
caused any problems and try to
fix
it as
soon
as possible.

Yours
sincerely


Omkar
Kamath
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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