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Nowadays, few people think that commercial inspire one to purchase things that we actually do not require. While, others believe that ads give us information about new items that might better our lives. This essay will explore two aspects of the banners which affect people's lives and to what extent. While some people believe that publicity sheds light on new products that might improve our lives. I have actually seen this with lot of my friends that whenever they see any relevant ad they always tell me that see this new product has come and see how it will make our life easy. For instance, nowadays hardly anyone uses cable tv, most of the people have now got firestick with the help of which people can see serials numerous times and can also see the repeat episode of it anytime so this device ads have actually made people to use it. Others argue that these promotional material motivate people to try things we in general don't even require. I would like to support this viewpoint because it has happened with me quite a few times. For example, Whenever i see these famous bloggers promoting something like any makeup products I tend to buy it although, I might be having one already of some other brand but as she has recommended to use it, I usually fall for it. Most of the time, i tend to buy under eye cream which after sometime is of no use to me. In conclusion, I would like to agree that some individuals think that advertising inspire us to buy things which one actually don't require and i don't agree with this that various ads tell us something about novel items that could change our lives.

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that commercial inspire
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purchase
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improve
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seen
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some
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agree
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tell
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