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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., Page 3 www.ielts.org

You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , Page 3 www. ielts. org 6V2K

Dear Sam, I read in the last week daily newspaper about your company, which is looking for gas station supervisor. I want to purpose my name for this job. I am 24 years old and i have a associate of business management degree from the columbia college Vancouver. Addition to this, i have 4 years of experience in supervisor on a liquor store in surrey bc. I worked 2 years as a part-time supervisor and rest of time as a full-time supervisor. I can speak three languages which includes english, french and punjabi which helps me alot when dealing with peoples from different nationalities. I quit this job because i moved to richmond and it's too far away. Further, the job your company is offering is just 10 minutes of drive. Moreover, i want to put this in perspective that i will give my 100 percentage on my duty and will never let this company down. I will always keep working hard so that this company stays on peak. If you would like to check on my past record, i already attached my reference letter from my previous work. I would love to hear back from you soon. Your's sincerely Gurleen Jawandha

Dear Sam,

I read in the last week daily newspaper about your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
, which is looking for gas station You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorsuperintendentcustodianexecutivechiefboss
supervisor
. I want to purpose my name for this job. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am 24 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
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columbia
 college Vancouver.

Addition to this, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have 4 years of experience in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorsuperintendentcustodianexecutivechiefboss
supervisor
 on a liquor store in surrey bc. I worked 2 years as a part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorsuperintendentcustodianexecutivechiefboss
supervisor
 and rest of time as a full-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorsuperintendentcustodianexecutivechiefboss
supervisor
. I can speak three languages which includes Possible spelling mistake found.English
english
, french and Possible spelling mistake found.PunjabiPunjab
punjabi
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me Possible spelling mistake found.a lotlotplotslotaltoaloft
alot
 when dealing with peoples from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 nationalities. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 quit this job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Possible spelling mistake found.Richmond
richmond
 and it's too far away. Further
, the job your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 is offering is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 10 minutes of drive.

Moreover
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to put this in perspective that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will give my 100 percentage on my duty and will never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 down. I will always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 stays on peak. If you would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 on my past record, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 already attached my reference letter from my previous work.

I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to hear back from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?YourYours
Your's
sincerely


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Gurleen
Possible spelling mistake found.LawandaJalandhar
Jawandha