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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her N7Qg
Dear John, How have you been? It's been so long since we last spoke. I've missed you terribly. I was over the moon when I received your letter. Now, responding to whether you should get a job or join a college, I strongly believe that ernolling in university is not the option for you. Knowing you from childhood, you've always hated firm programms and studying for hours and hours, which college is all about. Also studying will expose you to very little experience, something that is a big dissadvantage for your resume beacause employers look for experience much more than a degree. I'd always rememberd you wanting to be independent and working straight after highschool. So, being hired in a job is a great opportunity to gain experiience, cultivate your skills and meet a variety of people. Managing multitasks, time and dealing with deadlines will throw you into the real world and prepare you for good. I tell you my friend, getting a job is a blessing in disguise! Call center agent would be a good position to start. It 's a demanding one, but it will enchance your abilities and will definitely be big bonus to your resume. To top it off, working as a call center represantative will get you a competitive salary. Well, there you have it. I hope my suggestion helps you with your decision. Drop me a line to tell me what did you do. Warm wishes, Lily
Dear John,

How have you been? It's been
so
long since we last spoke. I've missed you
terribly
. I was over the moon when I received your letter.

Now
, responding to whether you should
get
a job or
join
a college, I
strongly
believe that
ernolling
in university is not the option for you. Knowing you from childhood, you've always hated firm
programms
and studying for hours and hours, which college is all about.
Also
studying will expose you to
very
little
experience, something
that is
a
big
dissadvantage
for your resume
beacause
employers look for experience much more than a degree.

I'd always
rememberd
you wanting to be independent and working straight after
highschool
.
So
,
being hired
in a job is a great opportunity to gain
experiience
, cultivate your
skills
and
meet
a variety of
people
. Managing multitasks, time and dealing with deadlines will throw you into the real world and prepare you for
good
. I
tell
you my friend, getting a job is a blessing in disguise!

Call center agent would be a
good
position to
start
. It 's a demanding one,
but
it will
enchance
your abilities and will definitely be
big
bonus to your resume. To top it off, working as a call center
represantative
will
get
you a competitive salary.

Well, there you have it. I hope my suggestion
helps
you with your decision. Drop me a line to
tell
me what did you do.

Warm wishes,

Lily
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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  American English
8 paragraphs
242 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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