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You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which will run sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizer(s) of the summer camp. In your letter: explain what sort of job you would like to do describe your academic qualifications say what experience and skills you have

You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which will run sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizer(s) of the summer camp. In your letter: explain what sort of job you would like to do describe your academic qualifications say what experience and skills you have KmNN

Dear sir, The purpose of writing this letter in commencing a temporary job in your running summer camp in the summer. As i have read about the camp in the newspaper and really glad to know that summer camps are organising and i do not want to miss this opportunity. I can be a good trainer for children because i have various talent regarding sports which will be helpful for the children to learn new activities. The international game cricket which i have been played at international level and national level. Even i have been taught in various colleges and universities. I have been awarded with gold medal from sports management of Patiala. I have been done my graduate and post graduate with physical education and particular subject which i learnt was cricket. Apart from this, i was a topper of patiala university which is in Punjab state. Well, I have mentioned earlier, i have various talent related sports. Furthermore I am experienced in cricket. I know all the rules and regulations which should follow by playing cricket being a part of cricket team. Moreover, I know the level of the fitness and the exercise which really needed for a best cricketer. I am a motivated person. Hence, It is on my tops that how to encourage a learner and keep motivationg. I will really appriciate for your soon reply. Yours sincerely.

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