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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Francis, First of all, I would to apologies for the disturbance we have cause last Sunday. We have never thought that the noise we made during our party has cause disturbance to our neighbors. As much as possible we have tried to keep our noise to a minimum but since most of us was already drunk that night, we have forgotten to consider people who are taking rest during that time. This was also my birthday celebration and the first time after five years that our family are all physically present in one event. Me and my whole family feel embarrassed on the inconvenience we have made from you and the rest of the neighbors. Rest assured that this will never be happen. As agreed with the officers of homeowner's that any parties will happen in the future, will try to keep our volume on or before 8: 00pm or try to rent a function hall if in case. Please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience we have made. Yours truly, Jaime Reyes
Dear Francis,

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.
First of all
, I would
Did you mean the verb “to apologize” (American English) or “to apologise” (British English)?
to apologies
for the disturbance we have cause last Sunday. We have never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that the noise we made during our party has cause disturbance to our neighbors. As much as possible we have tried to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our noise to a minimum
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but
since most of us was already drunk that night, we have forgotten to consider
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who are taking rest during that time. This was
also
my birthday celebration and the
first
time after five years that our family are all
physically
present in one
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event
.

When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form “I” is required here.
Me
and my whole family feel embarrassed on the inconvenience we have made from you and the rest of the neighbors. Rest assured that this will never be
It seems the correct verb form here is “happened”.
happen
. As
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
with the officers of homeowner's that any parties will happen in the future, will try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our volume on or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
8: 00pm or try to rent a function hall if in case.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience we have made.

Yours
truly
,

Jaime Reyes

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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