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Dear Hari, I did a quick scan on all production shield applications, we need to block the below “URLs", in the shield, for the below “Applications”. I will go ahead and create CR's and apply these changes in the shield, and I will ask the corresponding application team to validate the changes. If this issue is assessed as exposing sensitive data, we need to remediate this immediately. Thanks, Yours sincerely

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Thanks,

Yours sincerely

IELTS letter write a letter to manager

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

69 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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