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Dear Hari, I did a quick scan on all production shield applications, we need to block the below “URLs", in the shield, for the below “Applications”. I will go ahead and create CR's and apply these changes in the shield, and I will ask the corresponding application team to validate the changes. If this issue is assessed as exposing sensitive data, we need to remediate this immediately. Thanks, Yours sincerely
Dear
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Hari
,

I did a quick scan on all production shield applications, we need to block the below “URLs
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"
, in the shield, for the below “Applications”.

I will go ahead and create CR's and apply these
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changes
in the shield, and I will ask the corresponding application team to validate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
.

If this issue
is assessed
as exposing sensitive data, we need to remediate this immediately.

Thanks,

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter write a letter to manager

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
69 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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